At the setting of the sun.

Rich this hour with precision arrayed,
a banquet of beauty in wonder displayed.
Hasten, evening's coloured patterns ply
a mystique and ever changing sky,
fanned by the flames of day's sweet play,
the crimson-painted canvas steals the sun away.
An embroidered pageant of golden waves that die
shall close to relinguish its bright ebamelled eye,
with fading light, time serving, subtle heaven use
to create the bouyant atmosphere of twilight hues
with coloured fragrance of evening's expance;
invite radiant joys that with extravagance dance,
such furnace passions, this exquisite fire
reflects life's beauty, that with tears shall expire
to time's unrelenting, fast quickening pace.
In trust, our eyes may kiss tomorrow's face,
but, should destiny's hand my hour so chose
within these closing rays my breath to lose,
happily so, for I've savoured what's rare,
the freedom of birth in England's cherished air.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2012
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If we were to chose the setting of our life, would it not be at sunset?

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Maxeen_1
At the setting of the sun.
by: reguiny2006

Rich this hour with precision arrayed,
a banquet of beauty in wonder displayed.
Hasten, evening's coloured patterns ply
a mystique and ever changing sky,
fanned by the flames of day's sweet play,
the crimson-painted canvas steals the sun away.
So Very Beautiful Reguiny..... Sunsets I agree...
Are- Breathtaking; Hugs- Livy
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gift purple heart
Ladybee42
It's worth thinking of to die at sunset - and a beautiful one at that, but I rather think I'll live maybe another ten thousand years so I've plenty time to ponder that one. laugh

purple heart purple heart
reguiny2006
livy, Berni, Thank you both for your lovely comments, the poem was written some twenty odd years ago, the latter lines was an unconcious after thought, having marvelled at eve's late western sky, an inner voice of contentment spontaniously expressed, I have since been privilledged to witness many more simular delights, and long may it continue. Phil.
Odette67
In trust, our eyes may kiss tomorrow's face,
but, should destiny's hand my hour so chose
within these closing rays my breath to lose,
happily so, for I've savoured what's rare,
the freedom of birth in England's cherished air.

Another beautiful poem I missed. hug purple heart
Macduff5
Hi Phil,

A masterly journey into sensory appeals. There is just something so poetic about sunsets...maybe that time of quiet reflection after the hustle-bustle of the day. wine thumbs up
Happygolucky4u
wow I loved it.......I could sit and enjoy a beautiful sunset as much as some enjoy a good movie. A good sunset would be more to my liking. And I have been fortunate enough to breath air on mother natures most wonderous earth and if at sunset it would be my last I would still be happy for the time I had teddybear
reguiny2006
Anita, Odette, Macduff and Happygolucky, thank you all for your lovely comments, Phil.
Fellsman
Hi reguiny


This is fine poetry with superb use of metaphor. The narrative cannot be faulted. An enjoyable read.

Regards

Bill wine
reguiny2006
Bill, I thank you for kind words, they're much appreciated, cheers, Phil.
Yankee4youonline today!
A most beautiful end of a day.......or whatever in life makes it beautiful....when all the storm clouds pass....and a rainbow can actually appear..a most beautiful poem....
Ahyra
Beautiful poem reguiny bouquet
reguiny2006
Ahyra and Yankie, thank you both for your kind comment, regards Phil.
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