windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJul 4, 2012
the last stanza speaks hope.
very nice
windy
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJul 4, 2012
I want to join Poet#1 and Jazzy in welcoming you to Poet's Corner!! The best kept little secret this side of Athens, Greece! (Or is that Tokyo, Japan?) Where ever it's being kept secret.... I'm glad that you finally got in on the fun!!! Now.... show us what you've got up there in that awesome mind of yours kiddo!!! By the way.... your acceptance of Kickit's challenge gets a score of 9.337 from me!!
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your humbleness show's through this poetry without even slipping.
enjoyed this dear and thank you!
Kick..
Stepping back just to trip
Wobbling isn't easy
Praying that I won't slip"
Love it!
Catch me if I fall
I'll try to overcome this
Crooked fences and all
Fantastic
very nice
windy