Kickit Challenge

A thousand steps
Walking a crocked fence
Everywhere I'm looking
All I see is ends

Going ahead to tumble
Stepping back just to trip
Wobbling isn't easy
Praying that I won't slip

Reach out a hand will you?
Catch me if I fall
I'll try to overcome this
Crooked fences and all
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
Answering the challenge from Kickit, I hope you enjoy my humble attempt.

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Comments (10)

Motta
Marin, that was a worthy reading. You did just fine, don't feel humble about it!handshake bouquet
kickit22
any poem that comes from within the heart is a work of art
your humbleness show's through this poetry without even slipping.

enjoyed this dear and thank you! teddybear

Kick..
Poetnumber1
This is a lovely write Marin,nice to see you have sailed through the challengewine handshake M.M
Poetnumber1
Almost forgotdoh ''Welcome To Poets Corner'' hope to read more from you in the future.M.Mgift
Ondos
"Going ahead to tumble
Stepping back just to trip
Wobbling isn't easy
Praying that I won't slip"


Love it!
Odette67
Reach out a hand will you?
Catch me if I fall
I'll try to overcome this
Crooked fences and all

Fantastic thumbs up hug purple heart
jazzy75
Welcome to the corner...and what a great take on the challenge...well done.handshake
SundaySilence
What a cute write.
windyweatherly
the last stanza speaks hope.

very nice

windy
swade777
I want to join Poet#1 and Jazzy in welcoming you to Poet's Corner!! The best kept little secret this side of Athens, Greece! (Or is that Tokyo, Japan?) Where ever it's being kept secret.... I'm glad that you finally got in on the fun!!! Now.... show us what you've got up there in that awesome mind of yours kiddo!!! By the way.... your acceptance of Kickit's challenge gets a score of 9.337 from me!!
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