The ship...

The ship was dead,
Yet sailed along,
All passengers and cargo gone,
It creaked and groaned,
"I'm soo alone" and
"Noones been here for soo long",
Forgotten,forlorn,with sails unfurled,
The ship hurled itself off the edge of the world...
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Posted: Oct 2012
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Just a little something...

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Redex
the ship hurled itself off the edge of the world and
landed on a ledge, were it sent an sos flare
and was rescued by fair lady
cheering applause
Sorry first things that entered my head a happy endingpeace teddybear
madtat29
Ty redex...?..I thought it was a happy ending ;-)
madtat29
Thanks goldy..like your stuff too.. handshake
ganondorf
I especially like the last line. That's where the sea monsters dwell I bet
madtat29
Ahh yes..the kracken..thats some good rum drinking
Odette67
The ship was dead,
Yet sailed along,
All passengers and cargo gone,
It creaked and groaned,
"I'm soo alone" and
"Noones been here for soo long",
Forgotten,forlorn,with sails unfurled,
The ship hurled itself off the edge of the world...

A little something that ticks my boxes...Something very deep here. applause purple heart
madtat29
Glad to tickle your fancy Odette.. Lol :-)
niah9
I see a ship clearly, like in a child's picture book.....yet with adult feelings.....great write...loved it....Kathyapplause
orientalkoru
there are times I feel like this.. conversing thumbs up
madtat29
Ty Niah..theres a photo in my profile pics ,in case you didnt see it before i changed it...drinking
madtat29
Yes orientalkoru..feels like the constant waves with all lifes ups and downs sometimes...
Ladybee42
So short and so sweet Madtat - brilliant!

thumbs up purple heart purple heart
cherryreggae
I can really relate to this ship madtat , there's a depth to it!!!applause applause thanks 4 sharing!! Enjoyedthumbs up handshake
madtat29
Np Cherry Ty for reading drinking
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