I am a sensitve soul Only one heart to hold With time I wither My life coming down to a sliver But I'll never grow old
I'll come to be the cinder thats spread across your fingers But still this heart I hold is limber
I fall Far and deep For this mound I pull to my sides is quite steep Molding to the stiching of the land Simple as I am Refined sand My power under minded My witts undecided Forever the upper hand
nice write,a very pleasant read with such smooth tones to the thoughts and rhythms.....elo...
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 5, 2012
One of your better poem that catches our attention...keep it coming sensitive soul gal.
indigone213OPValparaiso, Indiana USANov 6, 2012
I am soo glad you guys enjoy it,thank you for all your comments. I am new to the poetry side of this site, and I love it soo far. Everyone is soo warm and creative!
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoNov 6, 2012
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Only one heart to hold
With time I wither
My life coming down to a sliver
But I'll never grow old
Excellent poem.