Give me a moment

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by Unknown

Oct 2009 436 Views 4 comments

Give me a moment

Author: Unknown

Just give me a moment, Just a small piece in time

to feel some sort of peace and quiet, to reflect on all i left behind

I have been a soldier, fighting for my own life and sanity

my mind is still troubled..my life a war zone, fighting ones who wish to harm me

I have not had much strength, I too have been my own demise

my eyes covered, my vains tainted...my mouth full of lies

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Posted: Oct 2009

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Comments (4)

poetengineer

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaOct 25, 2009

really strong personality u have it appear clear here and u have high self confiedence and this is good , thanks for ur share , your words here as gun shooting

gypsyheart

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 25, 2009

Love this poem of yours poetic_justice...felt like that at many times

Redex

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 25, 2009

pure strength in there

jazzy75

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAOct 25, 2009

poetic_justice, thanks to u - well expressed and full of insight.

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