Losing Will

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Oct 2009 385 Views 4 comments

Losing The Will

Author: Unknown

Hoplessly trying to claw out to see the light
losing strength and will to fight
trapped in this hole i have put myself in
so dirty and dusty it's hard to breath in
clawing cold walls and screaming out
knees and hands bleeding as i crawl about
I am only sheltered from the outsides light
caught in this hole losing sanity , i need to fight

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Posted: Oct 2009

About this poem:

I wrote this poem at a very hard time in my life, when i was homeless

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Comments (4)

jazzy75

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAOct 22, 2009

poetic_justice, strong poem and well expressed

gypsyheart

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 22, 2009

Very good poem poetic_justice.You've expressed it very well.Thanks for sharing

Redex

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 22, 2009

You did the fight, and told the tale, so all I can say well done, understatement as you well know

poetengineer

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaOct 22, 2009

u have clever always in using words in express ur feelings and situations and this make the reader feel true in ur words , thanks for u

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