Hi socrates44, Making Christmas a time of joy For every little girl and boy… May this be done through caring wrapped in the tenderness of love. 'Tis the season. Thanks for sharing the hope of A Child's Christmas with us.
ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USADec 6, 2014
Socrates, a joyful write indeed! For every little girl and boy!
diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoDec 6, 2014
This poem reads like it should be wrapped prettily and shared everywhere.... Love it....
socrates44OPSan Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoDec 6, 2014
candykid Thanks for your comment. With regard to the technical details that you mentioned, the piece is in the form of an aabb rhyming iambic tetrameter quatrain. It contains 8 syllables per line. As you have noted, the "child" in it steals all.
Hi Socrates...great idea...glad you brought it back...I love that the focus is on the boys and girls after all the magic of Christmas is seen through the eyes of a child. Merry Christmas to you and your family!
HarbalSouth Yorkshire, England UKDec 23, 2018
I've done my stint plodding round the shops looking for presents for little hearts beating eagerly. Now it's someone else's turn to set those little hearts a-flutter.
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And then joyfully makes its claim' that's so fun socrates Nice poem!
have a wonderful holiday season too
Really loved reading your wonderful poem...Beautiful!
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
Making Christmas a time of joy For every little girl and boy… May this be done through caring wrapped in the tenderness of love. 'Tis the season. Thanks for sharing the hope of A Child's Christmas with us.
Thanks for your comment.
With regard to the technical details that you mentioned, the piece is in the form of an aabb rhyming iambic tetrameter quatrain. It contains 8 syllables per line.
As you have noted, the "child" in it steals all.
Abby1963
rapturecapture
gnj4u
ImagineLove
Diana_1
All you lovely ladies, thank you very much for your beautiful comments.
I wish you all a wonderful Christmas.
As I said, please remember the children.
Cafe
Café
Leony
Thanks for your kind comments.
Hope it brings pleasant memories.
Best wishes to all.
Kathy
Wishing you all the very best too x
Thanks!
May you have a happy and holy Christmas!
Season's Greetings to you and
all the best for the New Year!
Thanks for your beautiful comment!
Merry Christmas to you also!
Thanks for your comment.
Wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.