Expose Your Heart

by Torrieenchantedmanhattan, New York, USA

Dec 2012 383 Views 8 comments

Expose Your Heart

I CAN SEE IT RIGHT THERE
I CAN SEE IT RIGHT THERE...FALLING DOWN
TEARS DROPPING ON YOUR PILLOW
YOUR STAIRING OUT THE WINDOW...

BUT WHY'S IT SUCH A SHAME TO SHOW
A SIDE OF YOU THATS WONDERFUL?
SO BEAUTIFUL, EMOTIONAL.
IT MAKES ME CRAZY, MAKES ME FALL
MORE AND MORE IN LOVE WITH YOU.
YOUR SO SAD AND YOUR SO BLUE.
BUT IT'S OK, YEA IT'S ALRIGHT, TO EXPOSE YOUR HEART TO ME TONIGHT.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Dec 2012

About this poem:

Its about how some guys like to hide their pain in front of their friends and girls. But i just want to know why some guys are so proud to the point where they think tears are for weak people. Im saying why hide something so beautiful and true?

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Comments (8)

TorrieenchantedOPmanhattan, New York USADec 5, 2012

So i meant their lol

TheKoreanGhostPerth, Tayside, Scotland UKDec 5, 2012

I cry , great releasant for pent upped passion of any kind.
good topic for a poem.
Charlie

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoDec 6, 2012

Not all guys

Lovely write,welcome to poets corner

M.M

cherryreggaebayside, New York USADec 6, 2012

Lovely write !!!!! torrieenchanted....crying.is a human feeling , that should never be oppressed, but we are conditioned differently...thanks for sharing

beautifulyouNew York, USADec 6, 2012

What an awesome write...

Bravo!

TorrieenchantedOPmanhattan, New York USADec 6, 2012

@cherryreggae your so right holding back what you feel is so unhealty. However my male friend does it all the time when he talks about the relationship he has with his father. I can see that he wants to cry every time he speaks about it, but he just says it's "nothing" i pray for him.

TorrieenchantedOPmanhattan, New York USADec 6, 2012

@beautifulyou, Thank you so much :)

TorrieenchantedOPmanhattan, New York USADec 6, 2012

And thanks a tun for everyone else who commented on my poem i so appreciate them. I take the good and bad.