Bad Place...

Darkness descends upon my heart mind body and soul torn apart , freedom in death my only escape the biggest of choices left to make.
I've fought this battle with every ounce of my soul but now I fear it has taken its toll, my mind is slipping losing control my heart sinks I can't go on anymore.
Get up! a voice screams from deep inside I'm not ready just yet to lay down and die, Fight you must with the courage of light as its the battle you fight for freedoms right.
I dig my heels in ready to attack these demons will pay for thier knives in my back, I lift my head and look to the sky "listen to me you bastards I'm not here to die" I move to dodge another attack then I feel it the pain ends my advance, silence now envelopes my soul eyes still seeing the battle unfold flesh from bone rendering blows "no respect for life" I think, then my eyes close.....
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Posted: Oct 2009
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jazzy75
rugged_one, you have a powerful voice...enjoy reading your poetryapplause
moonlove
hmmm....moping moping

sorry....but thanks for sharingbouquet
Dementiaonline today!
I really like this poem...very dark...and well written
gypsyheart
Very well written rugged_one.Thanks for sharinghug bouquet
amahlala
Fighting the fight..good, strong poem..enjoyed it!handshake
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