Crystals

Love can be a feeling, a sentiment, a caress
Love can be a dream, an engagement, a test.
True love is gentle, its forgiving, its pure.
True love is generous, its forthright, its sure.
Your love is jaded, its conditional, its demanding.
Your love is harsh, & it lacks understanding.

I yearn for love that touches my skin like a breeze
For a love that gives me wings and makes me feel free.

People deserve love that makes them feel strong
People need love that lasts all day long.
Our love should be courageous, sacrificial and warm
Our love should be a shelter after the storm.

12*24*12
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Posted: Dec 2012

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Comments (8)

hershorn
Very well said. I like it!
Fellsman
How perfectly articulated - a superb write...

Bill wine
morgen90210
Welcome to poet's corner with this brilliant poem ... Ancient Bullman
elo69
Let us set the highest standards for love,for it is are most precious gift....nice write...very deep and real.....elo.. wave
cherryreggae
A true definition of love....beautiful write!!! Venus...applause applause
Alicia48
love your poem... goddess of LOVE

and posted on Christmas 24 DEc.

thank you Venuspurple heart
mcradloff
The movie Christmas Story is set in the northern part of Indiana by Lake Michigan. The cold air coming out of Canada made for some cold winters in that part of the US. I think you define love very well, for it is an action, and it does involve work and sacrifice.teddybear dance
Venus888
grin wave
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