in my mind

by lonelydaisygusum, Ostergotland, Sweden

Dec 2012 456 Views 6 comments

in my mind

You have stolen my heart away
I beg you let my heart close to you stay

If you dont want it please
then my heart release

My heart been borken before
It cant take much more

How will i ever tell you
that i already love you

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Dec 2012

About this poem:

only something i fell inside of me and its hard to tell when you dont know the word to tell someone about fellings

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Comments (6)

elo69santa cruz, California USADec 30, 2012

what a sad write,you deserve the best Lonelydaisy(beautiful choice of name/identity)....elo...

lonelydaisyOPgusum, Ostergotland SwedenDec 30, 2012

thank you elo.

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USADec 30, 2012

It is a sad poem lonelydaisy, I see you are in Sweden, your daylight hours must be ultra few at the moment, it's bad enough here in the south of Ireland. Hope you feel happier since you wrote this piece.

lonelydaisyOPgusum, Ostergotland SwedenDec 31, 2012

Hi ladybee.
Soon the darkness will turn to more daylight and souls and minds will shine up again.
Im only littel sad for i got problem to tell someone that i really care or start start to get fellings.
I do think its to early to say I LOVE YOU and i like you well its sound more to a friend.. Its hard sometimes when im not that good to write or talk english.

Happy New Year To You

init2010Betzenstein, Bavaria GermanyJan 2, 2013

I always feel like a scoundrel, when I read poems like yours. Sometimes got the impression I am living on a planet full of instinct-driven apes. But then I read some lines like yours, and feel much better, as there is still humanity.