Just tell me why ?

Just tell me why ?
I can't just die ?!
This life is mine
Not by designe

Is mine to live
But i can't give...
I'm not alowed
To give my vow

I can not love
that is because
I don't belive
That love exist

At list not now
When people vow
To love each other
Then find another

And that's when they
Find another way
To live theyre life
With new designe

They brake some heart's
I think that's nots
You can go insane
Because of the payne

And that is why
I hope to dye
I want no part
In breaking a heart

I have no wish
To live like this
To live alone
Just by my own
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Posted: Mar 22
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this poem i write last night hope that you will like it, thank you

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d4nI314
Come on Yonik, you can do better than that. I mean, changing all this into a positive statement.
Life is for living and, it was your own choice.
We are all creators of our own life.
Think about it... teddybear
yonik1988online today!
thank you, i appreciate that teddybear
d4nI314
I know you can do it!
Cheer up my friend.

Don't forget your dream.
You have to manifest it with positive thoughts.
hug
yonik1988online today!
i try but it is hard ...and my dream died a long time ago ... but thank you again, you are nice and i appreciate thatsad flower bouquet
d4nI314
Never stop dreaming!!
That's how we manifest.
comfort
yonik1988online today!
dreaming doesn't take you anywhare, same as having hope...it is a lie that you give to yourself that things will be better when they actually will not change in any way ...peace
carlameeonline today!
A Good read, but dismal.

Life is what we make of it. Maybe you can try to have a positive outlook on life.
Start small, like with the blooming of roses and go in a positive direction. cheers
yonik1988online today!
thank you, i am glad that you like it, i apreciate the advice, teddybear sad flower bouquet
Abby1963
I understand your feelings when writing this poem .seems we might have a thing or two alike hug
yonik1988online today!
oo my, not sure if i should be happy that someone understand's my feelings, or be sorry that someone feels the same way wich can be a bit of a bad feeling :D ( i even wrote something like this on my blog about this tipe of situations) anyway thank you for the support and comment i apreciate it teddybear bouquet
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