The beauty in the shadow

I stood aside and gazed at you,
And with amazement, I was imbued.
How beautiful you are, I admired,
And wondered if I deserved you, I inquired.

You sat on a chair beside a tree,
Seeming like an angel, not just human, to me.
In the shade of the enveloping tree,
And the sun seemed to pause, agree.

And the wind seemed to whisper to me,
I've never seen beauty like hers, you see.
As if she were a deity,
Lost in the day, yet arriving in the night, so subtly.

You seemed to be so divine,
Beside that tree, in that light so fine.
With the wind caressing your face,
And at your feet, greenery embraced.
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Posted: Feb 4
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it was originaly writen in Romanian word, this is the translated version of it, hope you will like it, thank you

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carlameeonline today!
"You seemed to be so divine,
Beside that tree, in that light so fine.
With the wind caressing your face,
And at your feet, greenery embraced. "


When the heart speaks.
Nice poem.
yonik1988online today!
thank you so much, i apreciate it sad flower sad flower teddybear
Mizzy4
Cupids arrow certainly landed directly on your heart Yonik. Very romantic poem, nicely written.

Mick.
beer
yonik1988online today!
hehe, nope it did not, i run fast and far from it rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing but thank you, glad that you like it cheers
southmiami4321online today!
Yonik , I'm sure this heartfelt romantic poem is as beautiful as in Romanian....SM
yonik1988online today!
thank you so much, i have many others but i can not translate them and make them sound good in english to and keep the rime :( only few of them work this way. thank you all once again, much apreciated
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