A lonely life

by yonik1988Constanta, Dobrogea, Romania

Apr 24 166 Views 7 comments

A lonely life

Author: yonik1988

I chose a lonely life
Without a wife
No one to share
Tears of despair

No one to give
Reasons to live
No one to love
And meet above

No one to care
When i get there
No one to wait
Beyond the gate

No hand to hold
Till i grow old
No lips to kiss
And none to miss

But to be fair
Let's not despair
It's not all bad
When i'm in bed

It's not all sad
If i get mad
No one will keep
Me from a drink

So if I may...
It is okay
I guess I could...
Say, it's all good

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Posted: Apr 24

About this poem:

I just wrote this poem, it is the original version, no Romanian version this time :)

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angel99999n/a, Western Sri LankaApr 24

Nice. But why it changed from I, to "you" ...?
In the latter half of the Poem.
Yes. When we learn to cope.it is easy.
Without the drama.

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yonik1988OPConstanta, Dobrogea RomaniaApr 24

hi, yes it did but i guess i was still talking about myself, but i do not know, i thought it sounded better like this and in that context i wanted some others that feels the same to find themselves in it to :D

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angel99999n/a, Western Sri LankaApr 25

Hi dear ,

I cannot write to you directly as you've got setting restrictions on your profile.
No worries. Just thought of telling you.
So, the poem will be perfect.

Not many would say the defects of a piece of writing.

Do take care .Be happy.
Stay Blessed

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yonik1988OPConstanta, Dobrogea RomaniaApr 25

yes that is true, and i apreciate that, i think that a writer must accept different point's of view from people, good and bad, because they help you write better or keep writhing as good as you can :) so thank you again