I'm not trying to cross any line

I'm not trying to cross any line
But it is so hard, when this life is actually mine
I'm trying to avoid stepping on a mine
But I'm on a minefield, and nothing is fine

The line between life and death seems to be so fine
So don't ask me to hang here, not crossing the line
When my life is hanging on a line so fine
The line has been crossed by someone Divine

I'm trying to keep walking with every step
I'm hoping to live with every breath
I hope that God will hold my hand
And be my guide until the end

I do not know what the end will be
But I still have hope that He's with me
It could end here for me tonight
But if He's with me, I'm gonna be all right

If I do not make it to the end of the line
The only life lost is gonna be mine
But if I do make it to the end of the field
Then I'll enjoy every breath of the wind
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Posted: Feb 11
About this poem:
This is my first try on writing a poem in english so do not be to harsh on me :)

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carlamee
Nice poem.

"If I do not make it to the end of the line
The only life lost is gonna be mine
But if I do make it to the end of the field
Then I'll enjoy every breath of the wind."


I am of the belief that the demise of a person is the end of his/her line. thumbs up
yonik1988online today!
thank you so much, i apreciate that, i am glad that you like it, and glad to see a positive comment on it teddybear sad flower bouquet bouquet bouquet hug
southmiami4321online today!
Yonik, nice write. Writing in English with another basic language is dificult, meaning of the words to say are universal.
I do not know what the end will be
But I still have hope that He's with me
Me to my Dear Poet.
SM bouquet
southmiami4321online today!
Me too (sorry I meant) SM
yonik1988online today!
thank you so much, yes it can be a challenge to write in a another language and make it still sond good and have a good meaning :). thank you so much, for your time, and comment, and i am glad that you like it, i apreciate it teddybear bouquet bouquet sad flower
lilygold76
My dear even though English is not your language,still this has been a wonderful effort in portraying your feelings.No one is perfect enough to judge another.May God be your Refuge & Strength.rose
yonik1988online today!
thank you so much, i apreciate that sad flower sad flower sad flower
ladyjewel
Hello there, I think you did a wonderful job with this poem wine
It's like life is walking through a minefield we never know when our time is up, so live each day fully and believe we are protected teddybear
yonik1988online today!
thank you so much, i apreciate that, and i am glad that you like it, yes that is true, thank you for your comment, it means alot to me to see that people read it and apreciate it thank you all for taking your time to live a comment teddybear sad flower bouquet cheers
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