I'm not trying to cross any line But it is so hard, when this life is actually mine I'm trying to avoid stepping on a mine But I'm on a minefield, and nothing is fine
The line between life and death seems to be so fine So don't ask me to hang here, not crossing the line When my life is hanging on a line so fine The line has been crossed by someone Divine
I'm trying to keep walking with every step I'm hoping to live with every breath I hope that God will hold my hand And be my guide until the end
I do not know what the end will be But I still have hope that He's with me It could end here for me tonight But if He's with me, I'm gonna be all right
If I do not make it to the end of the line The only life lost is gonna be mine But if I do make it to the end of the field Then I'll enjoy every breath of the wind
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Posted: Feb 11
About this poem:
This is my first try on writing a poem in english so do not be to harsh on me :)
"If I do not make it to the end of the line The only life lost is gonna be mine But if I do make it to the end of the field Then I'll enjoy every breath of the wind."
I am of the belief that the demise of a person is the end of his/her line.
Yonik, nice write. Writing in English with another basic language is dificult, meaning of the words to say are universal. I do not know what the end will be But I still have hope that He's with me Me to my Dear Poet. SM
thank you so much, yes it can be a challenge to write in a another language and make it still sond good and have a good meaning :). thank you so much, for your time, and comment, and i am glad that you like it, i apreciate it
My dear even though English is not your language,still this has been a wonderful effort in portraying your feelings.No one is perfect enough to judge another.May God be your Refuge & Strength.
Hello there, I think you did a wonderful job with this poem It's like life is walking through a minefield we never know when our time is up, so live each day fully and believe we are protected
thank you so much, i apreciate that, and i am glad that you like it, yes that is true, thank you for your comment, it means alot to me to see that people read it and apreciate it thank you all for taking your time to live a comment
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"If I do not make it to the end of the line
The only life lost is gonna be mine
But if I do make it to the end of the field
Then I'll enjoy every breath of the wind."
I am of the belief that the demise of a person is the end of his/her line.
I do not know what the end will be
But I still have hope that He's with me
Me to my Dear Poet.
SM
It's like life is walking through a minefield we never know when our time is up, so live each day fully and believe we are protected