In the paradise of my thoughts

And now the longing starts to grow,
Then slowly, by longing, I am consumed.
Feeling as if I'm dying from their loss,
I sense my soul fading, softly, into gloom.

In the paradise of my thoughts, I roam,
Gently carried away into their embrace.
As if I become weightless, I am flown,
Lost in the center, in that sacred space.

It seems to me, astonishing and grand,
I would not dare to hinder their flow.
Slowly, I begin to ascend and expand,
Through the paradise of thoughts, I go.

Now a traveler in realms unknown,
I seek to explore with a tender grace,
Places adorned by a longing tone,
Beloved by angels, in sacred space.

I lift my gaze to the sky above,
And witness a passing cloud's chore.
I realize I'm a traveler, guided by love,
Through many worlds, an explorer.

Then a weary thought does smother,
Forcing me out of that ethereal soar.
I shall return, just another,
Back to the earth, a mere mortal once more.

And now the longing starts to grow,
Then slowly, by longing, I am consumed.
Feeling as if I'm dying from their loss,
I sense my soul fading, softly, into gloom.

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Posted: Apr 21
About this poem:
Originaly writen in Romanian word, but translated with the help o AI, i hope you will like it, thank you for your time

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southmiami4321online today!
Many of our thoughts can be mind wandering or mind wondering. Our brain never stops thinking. Our moods produce happy thoughts or unpleasant ones. The environment also gives us a stimulation as we hear, see etc. Either way, our thoughts carry anxieties, regrets.
While we wander we can be daydreaming or worrying, yet when we wonder our mind takes us to think about curiosities.
You displayed here beautifully your thoughts. Intriguingly as a mind can be. Enjoyed your write. SM
yonik1988online today!
thank you so much, i apreciate that, and i apreciate you taking your time to read and comment on it teddybear
angel99999online today!
Hi wave

It's beautiful handshake
But, it's sad at the end .

Anyways, thoughts and the mind play games at times....but the Most important is, to be strong to get along life's journey..
teddybear

angel
yonik1988online today!
thank you, yes it is true teddybear heart wings angel
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