Sitting on my porch having a beer In the distance the waves I hear This spot I have found Is rare and I have been around
Ive travelled afar but nothing compares at hand To the peace and beauty Ive found the good land Its a magical place This is truley a soulful space
Im a very fortunate man To live so close to the sea and sand The sound of the waves on a still night fills me full of sheer delight
I sit back with my fire Look up and see as many stars as you could desire My surf board leans upon the wall In the surf today I had a ball
I paddled amongst the dolphins Made me smile so much i had four chins Dolphins are magical beings I never get sick of again seeing them catch a wave along my side and together sharing that special ride
I slap my hand upon the waters crystal surface The dolphin slaps his tail replies on purpose hes saying hey that was such fun Lets catch another one
I finish and make my way in all wet and stand and watch the beautiful sunset Walk on home and sit on my porch content watching my fire and feeling spent I feel its nothing that i lack when im sitting here and kicking back
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKJan 31, 2013
Hi Beachnit Really enjoyed your poem..from the stars to the beauty of the Dolphins.. & in your contentment of your surroundings..
I feel its nothing that i lack when im sitting here and kicking back
BeachnitOPMt gambier, South Australia AustraliaJan 31, 2013
Thanks Lady glad you liked it.. As the poem suggests i am a fortunate man...
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 1, 2013
You sound as though you live in a paradise.I enjoyed your poem merci
I slap my hand upon the waters crystal surface The dolphin slaps his tail replies on purpose hes saying hey that was such fun Lets catch another one
I finish and make my way in all wet and stand and watch the beautiful sunset Walk on home and sit on my porch content watching my fire and feeling spent I feel its nothing that i lack when im sitting here and kicking back
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niah9Auckland, New ZealandFeb 1, 2013
Beautiful Beachnit.....I was there with you, and made me glad I am going back to my paradise soon, where my NZ journey started....very special beaches, but hundreds of miles where I am now....but I understand....Kathy
BeachnitOPMt gambier, South Australia AustraliaFeb 1, 2013
Hi poetnumber1 Thanks mate Appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem I like this one it's a fav of mine :)
BeachnitOPMt gambier, South Australia AustraliaFeb 2, 2013
Hey cherry Thanks so much and ditto your poetry is awesome
BeachnitOPMt gambier, South Australia AustraliaFeb 2, 2013
Hey Kathy Thanks Returning to paradise sounds a good choice lol
BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 3, 2013
Totally felt like I was right there with you and the dolphins!
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Really enjoyed your poem..from the stars to the beauty of the Dolphins..
& in your contentment of your surroundings..
I feel its nothing that i lack
when im sitting here and kicking back
I slap my hand upon the waters crystal surface
The dolphin slaps his tail replies on purpose
hes saying hey that was such fun
Lets catch another one
I finish and make my way in all wet
and stand and watch the beautiful sunset
Walk on home and sit on my porch content
watching my fire and feeling spent
I feel its nothing that i lack
when im sitting here and kicking back
Thanks mate Appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem I like this one it's a fav of mine :)
Thanks so much and ditto your poetry is awesome
Thanks
Returning to paradise sounds a good choice lol