darkness falls

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Mar 2013 744 Views 13 comments

darkness falls

the dark reaper appears
as im sold up the river
dont pay the ferryman
as the angel of darkness
falls upon the death of love
hell opens its gates
showing me the torment within
needles and pins
scratching my brain
as the dagger tears my heart
leaving my brain a mess
sleeping virtually impossible
the begging of pain
in the torment of my heart
angel of god help me
as the mourning begins
darkness beholds me
my darkest hours

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Posted: Mar 2013

About this poem:

days without sleep working out were it went wrong without an answer

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Comments (13)

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMar 5, 2013

depth of feeling in this ty for the share Liam trust you are well

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 5, 2013

as happy as ive been in a long time,thank you for asking hope alls well on your side thank you for taking the time always a pleasure

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 5, 2013

Dark and deep,nice one.

heidi3626donegal, Donegal IrelandMar 5, 2013

thank you for such a nice comment

heidi3626donegal, Donegal IrelandMar 5, 2013

he is a great poet

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 5, 2013

poetno1 always a pleasure thanks hope you enjoyed

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 5, 2013

oooh heidi love it when you comment

doctorwho10Donegal, IrelandMay 7, 2013

good poem liam got depth

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 9, 2013

charlie thank you so much your a pal

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKMay 9, 2013

nice one my friend. I felt the pain. It's always the mark of a man how he climbs back out of his personal Hell. This touched memories, even for the Dark Man. Thank you.

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 9, 2013

Hi Darkhorse

I can relate to your wonderful poem in every aspect of its pain and sadness

darkness beholds me
my darkest hours

Well on the brighter side...things can only get better so chin up and the sun always shines on a brand new day

Thank you for sharing your heartfelt thoughts