honey

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Mar 2013 771 Views 11 comments

honey

you to me
are an orchid
an exotic flower
holding so much beauty
no flower will match
you open up to recieve me
like a bee pollenating
landing on you
my perfect match
the nectar of the gods
mixed with honey
your my mead
drunk around you
as love swarms around
your space
i make my beeline
to your very heart
my sweetest honey

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Posted: Mar 2013

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Comments (11)

veggieoneKingsthorpe,Northampton, Northamptonshire, England UKMar 13, 2013

'i' before 'e', except after 'c'.

watersandthewildCoast, Donegal IrelandMar 13, 2013

It is not gracious
To find fault in
the masonry of a bridge
you use.( I before E)

Better to be grateful,
or build your own.

Good write hoss.

Ru

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMar 13, 2013

hi Liam a fine write regardless of the e - i ( be nicer if pointed out privately in e-mail)that aside most enjoyable flowing poem

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 14, 2013

thank you veggieone for your time ill correct mistake

heidi3626donegal, Donegal IrelandMar 14, 2013

i see people still like to point out mistakes private mail then plsssssssss

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMar 14, 2013

the foolish woman hasn't even wrote a poem if she can't write then don't give negative banal comments all I can say if she ever does write one she had better make sure she dots every i and crosses every t until then put up or shut up lol

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 14, 2013

A beautiful and such an affirmations of commitment on the last lines.

Thanks for the read.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 14, 2013

well said shadow lol