I understand what you are saying. I don't feel it has anything to do with money or you picking up chicks, for I know that is not who you are as a person. You care for all. I feel it is about you're honesty and how you alway seem to care for others. I feel you are just saying how others should also care, be honest and trust. You speak only from the heart and of peace. This poem is well done, my friend. It is true that we can not judge a person by their profile. They say here in America you cannot judge a book by it's cover. Same goes for anyones profile.
If someone is truely interested, cares and wants to know the real you, they won't need alot of words on a profile. They can read your poems and see you are a good soul and friend to all! God Bless You! Peace!

Hey sabeel,
courage is a good writer but she's no prophet. When you write a poem venting about what some women are like, if you ask me, the last thing you want to hear is a woman you have no chance with,telling you that you're feelings are what's most important. You know you're more than a profile, hence the quality poem... when you want to write about how shallow some people can be, don't let someone tell you that "you're on the right track by expressing yourself" . You're four steps ahead, Some women think you have to write like a butterfly in order to express yourself, write from the hip if you have to, if the right girl understands you then all the better. Keep writing! and be yourself, not "that" extension of what the right girl might want to hear.

I like it.

i am just begining to feel this now.
thank you so much/