Till The Day I'll No Longer Wait

Looking into those eyes of yous makes me want to melt but i cant help but seeing you as someone else. As you left me standing there to cry i whipped my tears till they became dry. you said you loved me then why did you leave it's still so hard for me to believe. I'll give you as much time as you need and i'll still be here waiting when you decide you want me. you promised forever till your last day so i know your going be back to stay. i just hope it's soon so not much longer i'll have to wait...
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Posted: Apr 2013

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hotsouthernmess1
thanks but i wrote this a long time ago and thought i'd post it
Fellsman
Hi hotsouthernmess1

Ah! I thought this was a very mature write for an 18 year old, it never crossed my mind that it might have been written a long time ago when you were (presumably) a quite young school child. Your style has a rather familiar air about it, have you ever posted to this site before?

Best wishes

Fellsman.
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