Traveler

Though I walk through
the shadow of death,
Though icy fingers claw at my chest,
Yea trying to steal my very breath,
I will not rest,
I travel on,
Though all hope of hope is gone,
And things have gone so awful wrong,
I travel on,
Through the saddest of dreary days,
Though the maze is a foggy haze,
I travel on...
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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
Gotta keep going...

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shadow1950
hi Tony "I travel on" well you just have to keep going no matter what well pennedteddybear bouquet hug kiss
madtat29
Yup shadow..stomping through the mud and the muck..Ty for stopping bydrinking
darkhorse555
no sunshine in the foggy haze hope a rainbow appears showing you direction thumbs up angel
madtat29
Thanks darkhorse..a rainbow or a Ray of Sun breaking through the clouds would be cool...drinking
Fellsman
Hi madtat

When things are really bad, there are times when it's because we continue doing the same old stuff that caused things to turn bad in the first place - and in these circumstances, the only way things are ever going to change for the better is if we change ourselves... change what we are (or have been) doing and start doing whatever it takes to turn our lives around.

That's the truth of the matter. A chilling write, dear poet!

Best wishes

Bill cheers
Odette67
Though I walk through
the shadow of death,
Though icy fingers claw at my chest,
Yea trying to steal my very breath,
I will not rest,
I travel on,

We must travel on in life, though we are beaten down at times, I find writing poetry helps me to cope when days look bleak. A very poignant poem. hug purple heart
Jyonnah
Though all hope of hope is gone,
And things have gone so awful wrong,
I travel on


And you're not alone, Madtat! I, for one, am traveling on with you, my friend. The foggy haze has gotta clear at some point. Thanks for sharing!! hug daisy bouquet
madtat29
Ty for the insight fellsman ..I keep playing out of my league I think...need to go back to softball..loldrinking
madtat29
Yes Odette writing helps...I find a lot of cussing about it seems to lessen the pain too...drinking
madtat29
Cool J...a travel partner...maybe ill see you out there hitchhiking...I've got my thumb out for both of ushandshake
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