It is a fragment of prose! correct my English, pls

Quiet day ...
The roses in this space are somewhat wilted and sad {}
Laughter is not fulfilled in this environment ?
Birds sometimes calms down, sometimes it annoys ...
"Silver Rain" continually fall ... Thanks to Heaven!
Sporadically a sparrow sings, somewhat lonely
A motorcyclist passes by raucous street not
The sun is still warm,
My love calls me and says give me attention
Little things girls heart - who likes to hear a gentle song
I love you!
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Posted: Jun 2013

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Comments (2)

ladyjewelonline today!
This is a sweet poem, and its you, people will work out the english wave bouquet welcome
sweet197112
Hi Lad,


No, you are sweet darling
Have a nice nite!
xoxohug
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