Valiant Rose

The very early sudden snow storm
has caught out the rose bush
there amidst two feet of snow
bravely it opens its scarlet petals

A vivid bright spectacle against
the pure white new snow drifts
I look realising that as it struggles
proudly fighting the harsh conditions

Standing stately tall and unphased
seeming to give itself a good shake
as if to say, bring it on, do your worst
whatever you throw at me I will survive

So thus are there parallels in life
adversity rears its ugly head
when you are least expecting it
taking you unawares, off guard

Now do you go boldly forth?
display your glory to all around?
or do you fold up and give in?
the choice is in our own hands
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2013

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rapturecapture
Hi Shadow

Powerful write and a very interesting read..

I loved the last line.
Thank you for sharingteddybear hug angel wave
2725dl
It reminds me of birth Shadow, lovely write.bouquet
Arteee
For me I go boldly forth... A beautiful and powerful write sweet shadow1950 a wonderful piece and thoroughly enjoyed..
Warm and kind regards.. Vickie..
teddybear thumbs up rose angel2 daisy
Poetnumber1
This is deep and powerful my friend.Loved this one from you.Fantastic!teddybear hug
shadow1950
hi Martina ty for visiting I have altered things a bit lolteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
hi DL good way of describing it ty for readingteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
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such a beautiful way of discribing how something that looks so frail can show the world how strong it isbouquet bouquet hug
Serenity4two
In the face of adversity
the choice is there to either lie down
or stand tall with courage to face the challenge thumbs up
This is a lovely poem Shadow thumbs up
Warm regards --Fiona hug
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