Damn this heart, It won't stop breaking, This hole in my chest, It won't stop aching, A smile on my face, I can't stop faking, For others sake, My feelings forsaking, I keep saying inside, "Everything's fine.", Trying so hard, To believe my own lies...
Hi, madtat29, For some, The happy mask works. For others, comfort is found in the heart that keeps on beating until "Everything's fine.", for real. Thanks for sharing your verse.
Hey madtat cool write .........so much said in so few words .....i often wonder how many people put up a brave front to cover for so much more in their lives..........enjoyed this mate regards Nu
Yup Nu ... and at work with the guys is a different mask than with the family than with the friends...seems there a closet full of disguises ...a guy could lose his identity...
I can understand this poem so well... The happy mask...smiling for others....when in fact we are not happy inside...the one thing I have learned in life is it is forever changing. Sometimes I just get up and do what is in front of me to do trying to out wait the bad, smiling, because to not do so would then put others amist my problems and to many cooks do spoil the broth
sometimes we just have to wear those masks Madtat29...just like the sky...sometimes it's bright...sometimes it's grey...it helps us appreciate the good from the bad...awesome write...love it...
Ugn ..if only the truth wasn't so harsh sometimes ..Ty Niah
john17021984campbelltown, New South Wales AustraliaJul 13, 2013
Hi Madtat, Everyone at sometime wears a mask to hide their emotions, if this is a self portrait of yourself, you will do all you can to hide behind this visage, love in the end conquers all and you will be then wearing a happy mask for all the right reasons. I enjoyed your poem, as each poem I read tends to inspire my way of life, stay happy my friend. John
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 15, 2013
I can relate to this one bro.A fine piece.¡Bien hecho!
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For some, The happy mask works. For others, comfort is found in the heart that keeps on beating until "Everything's fine.", for real. Thanks for sharing your verse.