Whimsical Thoughts

The winding lane twists and turns
as it meanders up hill and down dale
stretching far ahead, a silvery thread
glistening and glinting beckoning me on

Peaceful countryside noises abound in the air
cooing of woodpigeons, rapid tapping of woodpecker
raucous cries of rooks nesting in the trees nearby
low mooing of cows and bleats from the young lambs

As I journey onwards beneath the vibrant blues skies
I come to a brow and there stretched out before me
a landscape so picture perfect it moves me to tears
verdant hues of green from the meadows scent filled air

This is where I want to be and to grow gracefully old
to put down my roots and settle in this peaceful vale
to wake each day to the glories of nature each different
something new to catch my eye and fill me with delight

A place to rest with natures bounteous treasures spread
to revive a weary soul to heal the ravishes of every day life
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Posted: Jul 2013

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morgen90210
Linda my shadow Queen
this is artful poem
at its best
thank you
Poetnumber1
This is wonderful in its entirety dear Shadow.Really love this one my friend.(applause)
darkhorse555
sewn with the silvery thread in vibrant blue sky's beautiful linda grin angel
ladyjewelonline today!
hug this sounds amazing, we miss the beauty with all the rushing we do so oftenbouquet ,
hope your pup is doing well?teddybear
shadow1950
hi Morgeb and Ty pleased you enjoyed it teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
dearest M.M ty so much so happy you enjoyed it
teddybear bouquet purple heart hug wine angel kiss
shadow1950
hi Liam countryside is beautiful ty teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
mr1983
It is like you have took all these words, mixed them in a bag and slapped them out on a page. There is no need to introduce complexity into poetry just for the sake of it or because a word sounds nice!sleep
CelticPoet12
Language so full of possibilities. I'm here to celebrate the written word, not pierce a hole in anyone's creative process. I liked your piece Shadow. Those who haven't anything nice to say, shouldn't say anything at all. Ignore em.
shadow1950
hi celtic nice to see you yes they are beneath contempt lol ty for enjoyingteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
Odette67
Get a life, Mr 1983. I feel so sorry for you, the fact that you can't write poetry must pain you. laugh
mr1983
One of the greatest abilities in life is to be able to take criticism, especially when it comes to writing.Can Shadow write poetry better than me? Of course. But I'm just been honest. If she can understand what I'm saying, she might actually learn something from it.bouquet
mr1983
Listen to yourself!!laugh She may be a better poet and you probably are too. But don't get carried away! Still crap by average standards!!laugh
Odette67
Come here darling, I think you need a hug. hug teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, shadow1950,
The winding lane..., a silvery thread glistening and glinting beckoning me on... It's nice when Whimsical Thoughts can lead one to a place that can revive a weary soul to heal the ravishes of every day life. Thanks for sharing.
Poetnumber1
I always loved this poem dear friend.You are an excellent poet and I truly adore all what you have to share.The critique is not qualified to make a critical assessment of any of your poems....just remember that.Warm love and greetings sent to you my dear and keep those poems coming.Hugshug
shadow1950
Mr 1983 I see you write blogs not poetry. As a several times contest winner and published I do just about know what I am doing yes this may be a bit long winded but the joy is in the words themselvesteddybear
shadow1950
ty Chrissie for standing up for me I found the banter/swords drawn quite funny to read again ty
shadow1950
dearest M.M ty although I am not in the slightest bit upset everyone is entitled to a view and Mr1978 is entitled to his. As you know I build pictures with words sometimes I fail lol
teddybear bouquet hug kiss purple heart wine angel
shadow1950
hi Joy glad you enjoyed ty teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
weemick1960
Hi shadow,
Really enjoyed this read as I always enjoy your poetry. I'm glad mr. big mouth didn't get you down. You didn't fail in this piece at all.
Catch you later.
MIKE.
shadow1950
hi Mick we all write bum poems from time to time and I would be 1st to agree that this lacks somewhat I missed my mark. That aside it's an honest portrayal of my feelings of that day. ty for reading teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
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