Trickling Down

Water flowing down
cascading it goes
bouncing over rocks
laughing gleefully
swirling so fast
down the mill
trickles through pipes
rushing out
into a pool
flowing onwards
sea bound
relentless journey
from source down
to the ocean
gathering body
getting mighty
until it flows
mingling with salt
its journey ended
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Posted: Jul 2013

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Comments (8)

darkhorse555
it was almost like falling down a waterfall linda with the salt the remains lovely piecegrin thumbs up
Poetnumber1
I see the inspiration is flowing these days my friend.Creativeteddybear
shadow1950
hi Liam and ty enjoyed your visit teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
dearest M.M it comes and goes lol. good challenge keeping to 3 or less words per line glad you like it
teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
steve1223
Such a great flow to this piece

bouquet
shadow1950
ty Steve nice to see you glad you enjoyed teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
beautifulyou
bouncing over rocks
laughing gleefully
swirling



your words, throughout, made me smile,
a 'feel good' write

nice sharing,

thanks shadow cheers
shadow1950
hi Beautifulyou Ty glad it brought you smiles teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
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