by shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England, UK
Jul 2013 397 Views 10 comments
4 Hauki 's
A simple daisy
yet exquisitely formed
white and gold abound
My blackbird follows
me around in the garden
cheerful tune emits
snow white so lovely
you poke up your head through snow
snowdrop glistening
a robin redbreast
tugged at a juicy worm
he was so pleased
yet exquisitely formed
white and gold abound
My blackbird follows
me around in the garden
cheerful tune emits
snow white so lovely
you poke up your head through snow
snowdrop glistening
a robin redbreast
tugged at a juicy worm
he was so pleased
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Posted: Jul 2013
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Comments (10)
I read your "Flowers and Sky".
Each of the three pieces fit the traditional haiku format perfectly.
Line 1 - 5 syllables, Line 2 - 7 syllables, Line 3 - 5 syllables.
The metre is also excellent.
It is nice when one can capture beautiful moments of nature in verse, especially when crystalized in haiku. Thanks for sharing some of yours with us.
My blackbird follows
me around in the garden
cheerful tune emits