A spark from your words From your eyes, from your smile Ignited within a fire truly wild That burned steadily blue Your caresses were the fuel that quickly fed That flame till it became A conflagration bed I whispered your name Then screamed for you Climbed walls in my mind Recited line after line Of every love song I knew The heat was hotter Than I'd ever known From Inside out I quickly burned Fire turned red, more than a hundred degrees Then sought that place of sweet relief A sacred temple where is exercised one of love's beliefs.... Until slowly I found sweet release.
Beautiful and passionate, I really love your writings. hank you for inspirtion...Jesse
diana_1OPSan fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoSep 9, 2013
Thank you, very much I am encouraged by all of you....
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 10, 2013
I totally agree with the lovely reviews above Diana. A most passionate write that really jumps out. I loved it! Have a great Tuesday ahead . Love and Light.
Londonlady76London, Essex, England UKSep 10, 2013
Very passionate...well written piece. Thanks for sharing.
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandSep 10, 2013
Sizzling and sensual ! well done Diana !! warm regards --F
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKSep 21, 2013
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A most passionate write..Thanks for sharing it..
Regards,
Ken
well done Diana !! warm regards --F