What Would You Take?

What would you leave behind
If you could only choose three things?
would it be gold, jewellery or some such like?
or some of the more mundane things.

Image that you will be on an isolated island
what three things would serve you best?
would it be clothes, cooking utensils and bedding?
all of the above could be of great use.

For me I would take my dogs, large piece of canvas
and lastly I would take music, that I could not do without
my dogs for company and to hunt for the table
the canvas would help fashion a shelter for us all.

The rest would come with time and hard work
the sea would supply a great variety of food
rich soil to till and grow crops of wheat and corn
fruit trees to gather plums, oranges and mangoes

Plenty of wood to gather for fires to cook on
I would dig a pit and place rocks in there
with a nice flat stone to seal it, let it burn down
and hey presto you have an oven in which to bake

Sit back and relax with some coconut wine
until the food is ready, tuck in and enjoy
the fruits of your labour as you enjoy some music
and watch the sunset as dusk falls

So when you stop and think on what to take
just remember that nature supplies us
with most of what we need, think deep and hard
before you decide trappings of life versus nature

written 09/20/2013
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Posted: Sep 2013

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wayne34
Shadow I would take with me my toothbrush and soap and tea and milk and I would be very and have a jolly time trying to catch me dinner nice write teddybear
shadow1950
Wayne that's four things you can only take three lol tea you could pick for yourself for soap use sand, a twig makes a good tooth brush and you would soon capture a goat or cow for your milk Ty for reading teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
darkhorse555
lovely piece of writing lindaangel
fjamesj9701
Lovely piece LShadow. Your poetry is always a pleasure to read and always a joy to find what you have left inside beneath each title. I read them here and there on the soup. Always a pleasure once again, so now what would I leave behind. Hmmm.... I would leave all material things behind and only take love , joy, faith, and all the beautiful people that connect those dots for me. ..Jessewine
Poetnumber1
Well this was thought provoking. I never really thought about what would be the three most important things I would carry if I was left with such a choice. Good piece my friend.teddybear
shadow1950
Ty Liam glad you liked it teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
here is a challenge for you write a poem in response of what you would take I await it with interest I think I will post it as a challenge have not done one for ages ty for reading dearest friend
teddybear bouquet purple heart hug kiss wine angel
bungallow55
Those things you picked are ok, I would add, a book.wine
shadow1950
remember three things only Ken maybe you will do my challenge? ty for comments teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
hi Jesse and ty for your feed back I like your thoughts I hope you do my challenge teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
madtat29
Ty shadow...thought provoking concept...excellent challengewine
hedistuff
Yes! Certainly the dogs must be there. 'Dogs are our link to paradise. They don't know evil or jealousy or discontent. To sit with a dog on a hillside on a glorious afternoon is to be back in Eden, where doing nothing was not boring--it was peace.'
? Milan Kundera-. Shadow, you seem to be a woman of vision. I like the way you see things. Pretty poetry...
cherryreggae
Excellent write shadow, I couldn't agree more.
Nature is a gift to us all and what we need is bountiful,
In abundance...just takes some work. Thanks again for a wonderful challenge,
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shadow1950
hi Tony great Ty for joining in I enjoyed your poem its good to see people taking part and some of the old faces too teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
Ty Hedistuff Ty for your review I am a healer and Fey so I do sometimes see what others do not not always a blessing lol teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
P.S you might be interested in my blogs on Africa I was there from 8 years old to 18
shadow1950
hi Cherry loved your poem Ty for joining in and for reading this teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
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