Cube

It was build by the government
It is a metal cube 25 by 25 by 25 rooms
Each room is about 12 feet by 12 feet by 12 feet
You wake up in this thing not knowing how you got there
You try to get out before you starve as there is no food or drink
Some rooms are safe
Others are not
Some rooms will dice you up
Some rooms have acid that will spray at you
Others have spikes that will go through you
Most rooms traps are triggered by movement
Some are triggered by sound
You better have a boot and a long string to test the rooms
Before you enter them
Why would the government build this monster of metal?
Why does the government do a lot of things it does?
Your tax dollars hard at work
Hardly!
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Posted: Oct 2013
About this poem:
I just got done watching the Cube, Hypercube, and Cube Zero. All are good movies with the first and the last being the better ones. With our government shutdown and just the not niceness that goes on there this movie really fits into the Halloween season.

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darkhorse555
did they have to fix loads of colours together can be quite trick if your not used to it excellent piece old palangel grin
mareemoore
good one and it really dose compare to our goverment....obama being the main culprit and the democrats his evel spawn. did you sign up for obamma care yet? what a joke,some of americas youth are being forced into paying 400 a month so dead beats get free insurance now is that fare. land of the free land of the sheep lead to slaughter with obamacare holding the two edged sword.
morgen90210
yelp! cube is cute
its small and dull
cube is new
like the colour blue
lives Dr. who
that's cube for you
gnj4u
Hi, mcradloff,
Thank you for sharing Cube and its multi-dimensions. Some rooms are safe Others are not... The ones we ourselves construct are often the most dangerous, however.
mcradloff
darkhorse555, thanks for your comment on my poem. Glad you liked it.jackolantern
mcradloff
mareemoore, thanks for your comment on my poem. The deadbeat really have it made it Obama's new world. The health insurance thing is a real stickler as it doesn't even guarantee care. By the time you pay the premium you don't have any money left to pay the 20%, and that is if you get approved.frustrated doh teddybear jackolantern
mcradloff
morgen90210, thanks for your comment on my poem. I liked your little poem too. Dr Who is a character I have heard of, but not watched yet. There was a song back in the 80's called Dr. Who and the Tartis, great song.dancing jackolantern
mcradloff
gnj4u, thanks for your comment on my poem. I like your take on the cube, that we can construct our own torture rooms if we choose to. This certainly is true, especially if we attract bad people into our lives.doh teddybear jackolantern
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