Your stuff is good,it really is.I thought it would rhyme but it doesn`t. I started reading with progress impeding any rhyme because there just wasn`t.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKNov 16, 2013
hi Raven'sgold men complicated? nah its all in the right approach ty for enjoying
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKNov 16, 2013
hi Rob tnx for the feedback glad you liked it
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKNov 16, 2013
ty dearest MM I am slowly getting better just taking so so long grrr. So happy you like this
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKNov 16, 2013
ty Banjan good to see you glad you enjoyed it
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKNov 16, 2013
hi and Ty Jim glad you enjoyed
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKNov 16, 2013
hi Diana and Ty dear lady Men the word says it all just as woman describes us well Tnx for reading
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKNov 16, 2013
Hi IBjunking lol I do write in rhyme too. did an acrostic monorhyme that was fun Freedom of style is important so I use several forms. Glad you ended up enjoying this
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"Women are all of the above, with added twists and turns." Too true. An engaging poem. I really liked it.
I enjoyed this poem and I realized that I was nodding my head in agreement as I read. Well penned!