14 word challenge

by shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England, UK

Nov 2013 447 Views 18 comments

14 word challenge

Author: shadow1950

Clipperty clop clipperty clop
went the shire horses hooves
as he pranced with glee

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Posted: Nov 2013

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weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKNov 22, 2013

Hi Linda, now i enjoyed this, It brought back a memory from My childhood. We were driving along a country lane and we came across three shires being lead along the lane. They were all groomed to perfection. They looked absolutely beautiful. It's just like reading your piece, they were prancing along quite happily. They can be absolute pictures of equine beauty. Thanks for the memory. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your friend always....MIKE.

nonsmokerWaterford, IrelandNov 22, 2013

LOL nice and simple.
It gave me a giggle.

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 22, 2013

I agree my dear poet, with the previous comments. I had two horses and used to ride them in the wind...with so much glee..

Thanks for the share.

SR

beautifulyouNew York, USANov 22, 2013

shadow, this is fun!
just really makes me smile

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 22, 2013

smiling i enjoyed dear friend

mimzy333unknown, Washington USANov 22, 2013

like a parade when the horses hoovs hit the pavement.

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKNov 22, 2013

Love shire horses
There so big and powerful but gentle giants classic poem you paint

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandNov 22, 2013

these are magnificent horses for sure Linda

I really liked this