Modern Ways versa Olden Ways (epic)

First let us take our friend the horse
a noble creature who serves us well
supplying us with a source of good compost
ferrying us here and there in fine style
pulling carts and carriages with aplume
carrying riders proudly on their backs
seldom a traffic jam and smell the pure air
enjoy the freedom to gallop with the wind

Now let us take the motor car
this guzzles fuel at an alarming rate
spewing out poisonous fumes that pollute
and if you should have a crash a tangled heap
of near useless metal is all that remains
and people torn and broken trapped inside
and the queue of traffic stretching back
maybe cars are fast but they come at a high price

In olden days the fields were much smaller
quilts against the landscape so pleasing to see
the hedgerows full of flowers giving shelter
to a host of birds, insects and small animals
the stately shires ploughing the fields
laying the lines true and straight
their leisurely pace giving dormice time
to scuttle away and find some safety

The big modern threshers and ploughs
need far bigger spaces to work so large fields
gone the pretty quilt work, gone most hedgerows
rushing over vast areas harvesting the crops
behind them lay the dead and injured bodies
of all the little creatures unable to flee the blades
now the crows move in to feast live or dead they eat
so yes more crops fast harvested but at a high price

In days gone by we dwelt in villages and small towns
where most if not all knew one another by name
you could safely leave your house unlocked
and your children played safely in the streets
neighbours helped one another in whatever way needed
and shared the little they themselves had gladly
street parties were times of great delight
but best of all you truly knew your friends

Sky scrappers looming towering up high
stinky lifts that break leaving one trapped
danger round every corner its each for themselves
rapists, burglars, murderers and plain gangsters
have a field day in the metropolis with easy pickings
here one keeps ones children safe and tucked away
concrete blocks of houses along concrete streets
everywhere you see strangers at what a high price

When one stops and really thinks about it all
are these advances really worth the price we pay
does it really matter with the vast food piles
if it takes a little longer to do the harvest
cars are all every well but where is the romance?
the quivering flesh of an excited horse galloping
does far more for me than a petrol guzzling beast
I just prefer the less complicated times of yore
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Posted: Nov 2013

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shadow1950
Ty SR I am please that you got the essence of this kiss wine hug
mimzy333
linda this is great just showes how greed and tecnolgy has destroyed mother earth,famley,frendships, and causes so much hard ship. wish the simple times where hear but on the up beat side it no longer takes days to get to the doctor,majority of illness is cureable,less death due to birth, more people to croud the earth like the parasites we are, there is both good and bad in our past as well as our future. sometimes i wish all of the human race would just pass on and let the world start over.
shadow1950
hi SR and ty for enjoying my epic kiss wine hug
nonsmoker
I like this, I love the contrasts.
shadow1950
hi Cameal good point about doctors but I still prefer the simple life ty for reading kiss wine hug
shadow1950
ty nonsmoker glad you enjoyed it kiss wine hug
gnj4u
Hi, shadow1950,
Amidst so many advances in human behavior and science, technology has, indeed, brought with it its own challenges. Although I'm think 4 horses at every household (not to mention apartments) would bring about its own set of problems, a healthy mixture of the old and new would be pleasing…one where what's better for the earth rather than for the pocket is what people choose to value and incorporate into daily living. Thanks for sharing your Modern Ways versa Olden Ways (epic) write with us.
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