Cold Begins....

Cold winter morning, i now turn on the heat
Everything's got cold in here, even my favourite seat
Why does it take so long to feel warm, my toes begin to freeze
My body begins to slowly shut down, as i hold myself and squeeze

My fingers have gone numb, my breath is getting fast
I close my eyes and change my mind, thinking of the past
My toes are numb and blue, as i put them near the fire
But its to cold and impossible, to feel what i desire

My skin is pale, I am losing feeling, my eyes begin to close
I'm trying to stay awake cos if i close them, then who knows
I slide to the floor with no control, and i am lay up on my back
I am starting to black out a bit, i feel im having an attack

I am in a state of despiration and suffer, what am i gonna do
I cant move a muscle in my body, alomost like i'm stuck with glue
I close my eyes and keep them shut, ive given it all i have got
Then wake a little later......holy shit this rooms to hot!!!
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
Hate the cold weather!!!! lol

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Tiger_Dan
snowed in snowed in snowed in cold cold cold cold christmas sad christmas sad christmas sad snowed in snowed in snowed in sick sick
boyshchrm6
Just can't win eh TigerDan.lol
thumbs up grin santa waving
Tiger_Dan
indeed!!!! lol a bit of 'cold humour' at this time of year!!! lol
jazzy75
Tiger_Dan --- lol...cute poem! Thanks!!snowed in elephant
Juneau
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing That was really good! That is me all over! I am freezing all the time - need heat and clothes, clothes and heat!! ...especially in this Scottish winter!

As I read your poem, I thought...that guy has experienced hypothermia, and I wondered where it was going... rolling on the floor laughing just loved the ending!!

Well done!
Tiger_Dan
thanks for the comments...........mmm scottish weather must get BAD!!!!! lol
Tiger_Dan
cold cold snowed in snowed in
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