Rachel

RACHEL


I was sitting at the church while waiting for the mass to start….
Looked towards the right side, and your seat is next to mine
Kneeling, hands clenched together
Sensing how fervently you are praying
Soon as you’ve seated, I looked on your face
You looked familiar I thought to myself
And finally I recognize you….
Oh Rachel my best friend, it’s you!

You looked different from years before...
That pinkish cheek I used to admire,
Looks dry and freckled now
Your lovely, dreamy eyes look weary and wrinkled now
That curly hair I love to braid now looks dull and brittle
I can feel the callous on your hands as you touched me
Those candle-like fingers and long nails that I used to paint
Now looks rough and dry
Your fair skin that I love to touch now looks tan

Oh Rachel, my lovely best friend,
What has the world has done to you?
I can’t see that smile on your face as you had before
we loved to smile; we giggled to small things and even laughed very hard
why do u seem so sad now?
As I hugged you tightly, you began to cry
Shhhhh….I am here, ready to listen…
When we bade goodbye, I saw your smile once again
That lovely smile which tells me that no matter what you’ve become,
Still you are my Rachel, my best friend forever more…
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2013
About this poem:
This is written for my best friend Rachel in grade school. She was one of the most intelligent and pretty girl in our school. I met her after many years ( about 25 years after) she looks differently than before.


P.S. I just joined 3 days ago and wanted to post in the forum but it says i have to be a member for 7 days before i can post. Thankfully, i can here. Good to see a lot of poets here.

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darkhorse555
very beautifully drawn piece on friendship angel
Purplenails
Thanks darkhorse.
Poetnumber1
Purplenails thanks for sharing your poem with us here at the corner. I thoroughly enjoyed perusing your first poem here, welcome to the corner.
trixie47
Beautifully written kind of piece! See more of your poems purplenails...new here too I joined 6 days ago. Good luck.bouquet
trurorob
Nice poem about an old friend.
Rob
Purplenails
Thanks evryone for the good words.
Stedan
True friendship never fades for we see before us the person we always knew, time takes it toll on us all, our outward features may change but your heart still holds and cherishes the memory of friendship.
Welcome Purplenails look forward to reading more handshake
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