The Old Man

For now I sit and wait,
Clock ticking away my faith,
Silent words in my head,
Voices that are long dead,
Alone I sit at night,
The moon my only light,
Devil standing at my door,
But he don’t frighten me no more,
For now I sit and wait,
Clock ticking away my faith.
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Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
wrote based on an old man living alone and waiting

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Mizzy4
Good poem Stephen, I have great respect for the elderly.
Regards......Mick. handshake
Stephenmcnulty
thank you i have too. i often based it around my foster dad cause i lived else where but he would tell me stroys so i choice to write it based on an old man and he enjoyed the poem.
rapturecapture
Hi Stephen

Very lonely and very bleak...You paint a very sad scene in this very touching heartfelt poem...

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug angel wave
Stephenmcnulty
thank you Martina by the way i love your poems .
i tried to put myself in an old persons shoes wondering how they feel and what may happen while living alone. i use to do drama and in class the poem came to me.
rapturecapture
Well you have the vibe for it, and I enjoyed reading

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug angel wave
TAR_734
Hey Stephenmcnulty!...how do you know my story?!-doh confused crying
Great Write, my friend!
cheers
Robert
Odette67
Excellent poem, you paint a picture with words. purple heart
Stephenmcnulty
I write with picture s and feeling. Thank you both.
beautifulyou
this is really good Stephen
i especially like how you express 'Clock ticking away my faith,'
pretty cool thumbs up
Stephenmcnulty
thank you so much.
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