Cracking open another can I hear the hiss from inside The excitement that the drink holds Knowing where it is going
Tasting the sweetness That lies within Gulping a mouth full Then another I feel it deep within
No thirst do I really have But sorrow deep inside I drink not for the taste Not even for the thirst Simply for the numbness Suppressing all my thoughts
How many cans Shall it take To quench this Thirsty sorrow
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Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
I wrote this poem, not being a drinker but giving my heart to one. I'm hoping that people who drink will be inspired to look with in and find away to quench their sorrow
Comments (5)
Nicely penned Angelicsoul
Robert
That lies within'
powerful, Angelicsoul
such a multilayered expression!
thanks for bringing your write to us,
and welcome
hope to see more
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