Beautiful Liar

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You lead me on
seeing my life was incomplete
whispering those promises
dripping honey sweet...

Now I am to understand
we are to be just friends
alone in my house of sand
contemplating inevitable end...

Such a comfortable liar
weaver of broken dreams
fantasier magical bean buyer
a dark siren mystifier...

Falling I must confess
I won't buy them anymore
demigoddess in little black dress
bedroom white liar galore...

I lived your beautiful lie
being the hoper and the prayer
looking for rainbow in our sky
and for you the proclaimed soothsayer...

But I became ensnared
in my self created fire
by such a beautiful liar
and a victim of my own desire..
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Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
They say the truth has its own form of absolution after much wine..

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Poetnumber1
Different write from you today Ken. Many search for true love but few find a true love devoid of all lies. Liked your Confessional poem today, nicely conceived. Chin up...comfort
darkhorse555
what an extremely beautifully crafted piece ken dear friend angel tip hat
Spartacus2012
Thanks Mustapha, Always appreciated my good friend..

Regards,

Kenwriting
beautifulyou
hi Ken,
if all that led you to your truth,
maybe everything will be okay rose
TAR_734
Really fine piece Ken ole Buddy!
"Such a comfortable liar
weaver of broken dreams
fantasier magical bean buyer
a dark siren mystifier..."
Wonderfully enchanting verse-I love it!!!angel wow thumbs up
You, P#!, Liam and Wayne, to me are the
"Masters of Love" (poetry)...smile.heart beating
Great Write buddy!peace hug
Robertgrin
cheers
orientalkoru
"But I became ensnared
in my self created fire
by such a beautiful liar
and a victim of my own desire.."


So much truth in this one Ken... thumbs up angel
mimzy333
i think we all make plans with those we love but sometims the love is more of an infatuation or attraction and last sometimes we are in love with the idea of being in love, but what ever it is it will never last because it is not true love and therefor hearts get broken when one leaves. No one is to blame and no one is at falt its just the way things are.
Spartacus2012
Thank you Liam old friend for your support and comradery..


Kenbuddies
Spartacus2012
Hi Robert,
thanks for dropping by buddy..By the way, she was quite easy on the the eyes but hemlock honey sweet..lol

Regards,

Kensuper
sundayrose1
I don't know Ken. But she is so beautiful..Take care.

SRbouquet gift
Spartacus2012
Hi B.Y.,
thanks for the visit..We live and learn I suppose..

Kenrose
Spartacus2012
Thank you O.K. for visiting..

Kenflower
Angel04
Wow Ken, you could make a movie out of this, I would watch it too, sitting back getting frustrated with her and thinking that poor man, I have actually seen this in men and women and have felt this pain myself, I don't know how any human can treat another with such nonchalance, very beautiful poem, nicely written

Angiehug comfort angel
Spartacus2012
Thank you Mimzy, sometimes that's the way it turns out..

Kenballoons
trurorob
Well written, depicts deceit accurately.
Rob
Spartacus2012
Thank you Phyllis, dear friend..

Kenflower
Spartacus2012
thank you Angel for a beautiful visit!

Kenrose
Spartacus2012
Hi Rob,
Thanks for stopping by..

Kencheers
Girlygirl196349
wow!! i feel the pain but i have to say well written thank you hug
Spartacus2012
Thank you Girly for stopping by..

Kenflower
Spartacus2012
Thank you Girly for stopping by..

Kenflower
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