Waking dreams

As all of this runs through my head,
I wish that I'd go back to bed,
Dreams of kings with queens.
Long forgotton things,
I remember them all,
Running fingers across,
Cracked, broken, brick walls,
Empty voices echoing lonely halls,
I hear them call,
Choose not to listen,
Tears brim and eyes glisten,
The aching loss of a love thats missing....
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
Woke up with these strange images and a deep sad feeling...wrote it down before it dissapeared in the daily grind...

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sundayrose1
Isn't the power of the mind so amazing Tony? Glad to read it and ponder on it.

Phyllisbouquet
rapturecapture
Hi Madtat

How wonderful for us, to hear your Waking dreams...
Stunning thoughts...

Martina xxxhug bouquet angel wave
madtat29
Ty Phyllis...I'm pondering myself...drinking
madtat29
Hiya Martina's..what a great thing to have you read it..drinking bouquet ....Tony
Odette67
Tears brim and eyes glisten,
The aching loss of a love thats missing....


Many times I would lay in my bed and think of a poem end, when I got up in the morning I had forgotten every word, so many poems I have lost like that, I now have pen and paper beside my bed.

There is a deep sadness in this poem madtat, very good though.hug purple heart
darkhorse555
deep beautifully penned dear friend god blessangel
madtat29
Ty Odette...I thought I had found something I lost..turns out I was mistaken...drinking
madtat29
Ty bro your visits and comments are always appreciated ...drinking
mimzy333
I loose alot in love and thoughts,I have maney paper bits with random thoughts written on them.
madtat29
I hear that mims...beer drinking
Poetnumber1
I would have my notepad close by because I'm not good at retaining such information bro. Loved your thoughts here pal. It maybe sad but it gives a good read.beer
cafetwo2010
These are great words friend. It reads like the voices
of the nations from time immemorial whose groanings
for peace immpressing itself on the human psyche.
madtat29
Thanks poet was trying to covey a lot of images and feelings in a short amount of words...
madtat29
Thanks for the deep comment cafe...good seeing yacheers
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