With flashing eyes she did enthral as to the beat of drums she danced a wild flamingo with clacking castanets her wide hooped skirts was all a-swirl
Golden earrings sparkling and flashing heels looking impossibly high as she twirls her eyes flashing enticing messages as the men flock to her a mocking laugh
Siren of the senses as well she knows she taunts and teases as she grabs hold only to push her admirer head over heels leaving him stunned and dazed in the dirt
In a puff of smoke she vanishes from view long rolls of drums call to her to come back the men look in vain for her return a soft voice enticingly calls from the shadows
Singing of long journeys to far away exotic places of caravan wheels swishing and of horses cavorting of smokey camp fires bristling with full cauldrons no clue to what lies within just enticing smells
She tells of lovers she has known in distant past entreating the men, who try their luck to no avail she sits brushing her long raven black hair of curls and the sparks fly giving her an ethereal appearance
The fires die low and still she has not yet chosen it seems she is waiting for someone not now here flashes of lightening fork across the sullen skies and the skies open in deluges of rain and thunder
As her admirers scatter seeking shelter she laughs spinning round and round hair flying out scattering droplets that glisten and sparkle in pale light at last she crumbles done to the sodden ground
A mighty flash of lightening rends the sky in half highlighting a jet black horse rearing up high she runs forward laughing he is here, he has come her gypsy king, he swings her up before him and turns
As the summer storm fades the last fork shows the two lovers high-lit on the rolling hill then gone, gone to their secret place of tryst she leaves lingering memories in men's minds of what might have been
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Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
I first posted here 1 year ago today. I have learned so much from so many talented poets here who were unstinting in their praise and encouragement To so many of you I owe so much. Dear friends I will pop in from time to time to read your work A special tnx to my friend MM without who's help and unstinting support I would still be writing just free verse to Liam for his encouragement and loyal support so many poets here that I love and admire I bide you all adieu yet not farewell for many of you I will see on Soup love and hugs
I think your comment was pretty accurate Robert. Shadow's poetry really shines.
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAFeb 18, 2014
I do rember Lynda and you will be missd
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 19, 2014
Well I would see you over at Poetry Soup. Thanks for all the encouragement and support Linda. May your poetry continue to shine over there on the big stage, to greater heights among the best. See you over there, but for now keep smiling my friend.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 19, 2014
Oh and an excellent job you did with this one. Very descriptive and appealing in its succinct imagery and narrative.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKFeb 19, 2014
ty Robert for me Soup is my family I have been there now around 8 months and I enjoy both entering and running contests there. So many extremely talented poets have helped me to conquer new forms and gently corrected my mistakes I love the resources there too there is everything to help a poet grow. I will not have as much time these coming months as I am bringing out a book of poetry later this year and will have a lot of proof reading to do it will be split in three sections romantic poems East African poems and a mixture of epic and haiku's. So exciting ty for your support dear man
RedexNorthumberland, England UKFeb 19, 2014
wow and what a last poem this was a wonderful read from start to finish. I loved it and wish you well on your journey. Yes it would be good to see you pop back now and again as we do in the end. cs poetry corner has its own magnet I think
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKFeb 19, 2014
hi Yankee my friend ty dearest man I will be back to read your lovely poems
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKFeb 19, 2014
ty MM of everyone who has helped me you stand miles above so much help you have given me and taught me so much My dearest poetry son and friend I thank you from the bottom of my heart I wish Fellsman Bill was still here as he is another I owe much too see you in Soup
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKFeb 19, 2014
hi Redex and ty I have watched you grow while you have been here and really enjoy your work the magnet for me is the friends I have made here over the last year I could never completely abandon you and them maybe after my book is done I will pose a challenge or two here This is a direct link to my work on Soup hope to see you there
Thankyou I will pop in and see what soup? is all about. Last time I joined another site I was slaughtered with of course true poets pulling my words to bits. I stopped juggling words for 6 months nothing came at all. Just been seeing a light in that tunnel now. Sorry do not mind helping hands gentle that is but I truly got torn to bits
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKFeb 19, 2014
would be very unlikely to happen on Soup there are strict rules which if are not kept leads to being banned same with blogs there We have dedicated greeters who give all the support needed to new members to ease their way there and there are many there who have been on here there so you would be among old friends
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeFeb 19, 2014
I must say my goodbye to a very talented and beautiful poet, Linda I was at soup. . its a good place but its security always gets me mad. . . at first it was smooth until the fifth month than I can't post properly. . . had to refresh so many times and even change to my tablet but the same. I might go back again for a few contest, they were fun take care, you have found your home, I know that for sure and am very happy my sweet friend.
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We have dedicated greeters who give all the support needed to new members to ease their way there and there are many there who have been on here there so you would be among old friends
I was at soup. . its a good place but its security always gets me mad. . . at first it was smooth until the fifth month than I can't post properly. . . had to refresh so many times and even change to my tablet but the same. I might go back again for a few contest, they were fun
take care, you have found your home, I know that for sure and am very happy my sweet friend.