it comes unexpectedly.. it makes ones heart happy than before.. it makes ones like poetry more than before.. it makes ones life more enjoyable and loveable than before.. it makes ones has more plans of wonderful future and expectations.. it makes ones smile more often than before.. it makes ones eagerly wants to be seen more attractive than before.. it makes ones time to time want to chat, meet, and spend the day together.. it makes ones think the world only belong to them both.. it makes ones forget all the things, only care for the one he/she loves to..
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
this is my first time post a poetry. need your all support and guidance as a beginner. thank you.
I enjoyed reading my firend but could not advise a poem is written from the heart is a good poem. Keep on writing is all I can say. Other true poets on this site will help you better. they certainly have helped me.
Mei82686OPCimahi, Bandung, West Java IndonesiaMar 2, 2014
@redex, thanks for being the 1st one who gave a support and encourage to me. A same thing like you have done on my blogs. Have a nice day, my friend..
Mei82686 Welcome to the "Poets Corner" or commonly referred to as "The Corner" As far as needing help, you need none! I agree with my astute friend "Red"..."Just write from your heart and "Poetry is Born"! Good poem here! Robert
Hi Mei, I like your first poem, well penned ! Now that you have tested the surface....... Jump into the pool ! Keep writing and have no fear...........Mick
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thanks for being the 1st one who gave a support and encourage to me. A same thing like you have done on my blogs. Have a nice day, my friend..
Welcome to the "Poets Corner" or commonly referred to as "The Corner"
As far as needing help, you need none!
I agree with my astute friend "Red"..."Just write from your heart and "Poetry is Born"!
Good poem here!
Robert
thank you for dropping by and read my poem as well as giving encourage to me. I will remember your advice and keep make a poem
beyond my expectation if you also a part of Poet Corner"
thank you for your comment and kind words.
Now that you have tested the surface.......
Jump into the pool !
Keep writing and have no fear...........Mick
thank you for reading my poem and giving me encourage.
I'll do my best then..
thank you for reading my poem and give me some tips of making poem.
have a good day..