god bless

trust me
when i say
open your eyes
you will see
a raging voice
hurling abuse
two wars fighting
one is love

both fighting
inside the heart
the other hate
and which ever you
may feed the most
will be the guiding light
of your soul

take one
good look
i will forgive
everything you do
and are going to do
as what i am
saying it will
consume you

not one single
one of you knew
the full story
yet you judge me
in my darkest pain
god bless your souls
is all i can say
troubled in
their hearts

everyone of you
are in my prayers
i hope you find
the spiritual salvation
your souls seek
as i am the one
dealing with
the pain
of loss
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2014

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Joseph1112
"Two wars fighting one is love... The other hate and which ever you may feed the most will be the guiding light of your soul. So introspective, my dear brother and in spite of your darkest pain And their judgement you say, "god bless!" So forgiving, so selfless as He was! Awesome write man! Thank u!
tiasinclair
LIAMvery mad
I have made a new profile to come back and make this one comment,
"LEAVE LAURA AND I, ALONE". I left the corner, I am trying to be nice, so please, "Allow me to be nice"!
Robertvery mad
doh very mad
darkhorse555
thank you ever so kindly joseph truly amazing beautiful heart touching eeply appreciatedangel cheers
darkhorse555
robert your welcome back anytime we are all sinners even me i hold a lot of love in my heart so the light inside will shine through i judge no one hope and pray for peace and love to shine there is to much blood of hate spilled in the name of love which is eternal i forgive everyone as they were all friends to me one of them the closet ever i forgive you have all played a part in my life that has touched my heart in one way or another angel
darkhorse555
robert can i ask a favor of you write chrissie something really beautiful as way of an apoligy she is a beautiful lady you know what i mean we all make mistakes thats why we are here angel
hariksna
God bless...brilliant write..thank you...comfort
darkhorse555
hariku thank you deeply god bless really very beautiful comment greatly appreciatedangel
paloma66
You are a good soul Dh from what I have seen on PC through your poems we all err,but when we forgive it a divine gift.May god alleviate your pain you are in my prayers.Amazing poem.thumbs up
lindsyjones
I love that Paloma, an ever endearing most gentle soul within our corner. I second your comment. It is a divine gift, to forgive. I do need some to still forgive me, but you just feel as though, it is never given, but like you say, what a blessing to be able to. So Liam, this is most wonderful plead to be forgiven.

Thanks for the share..

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darkhorse555
paloma thank you for the touching outstanding beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated god blessangel wine
candykid
No one can write like this except you.........thumbs up
darkhorse555
phyllis thank you for the amazing beautiful comment appreciated deeply dear friendangel wine
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