searching paradise

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Apr 2014 524 Views 10 comments

searching paradise

awakening in
early hours
looking into
a night sky
in morning hush
staring at
a smiling moon

little lambs bleating
echoes carried
into the night
floating out
into the distant air
crying sharing
my night
with you

floating over
closing eyes
trying to peer
of into the future
over the moon
and back

kissing you with
her silver fingers
in touching you
a treasured dream
looking into
the far off
distance stars

a universe
floats on
a paradise green
i am the leprechaun
and you are
a fairy queen

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Apr 2014

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Comments (10)

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 5, 2014

Aaaa there you are. Wow !, this poem is soooo beautiful Liam. I read it a couple of times. Awesome writing

I so did enjoy reading this thank you for sharing

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 5, 2014

Dear liam,
You have a big heart, and you write from the very depth of your soul.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 5, 2014

amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend heartfelt

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 6, 2014

christina thank you ever so kindly dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanApr 6, 2014

HEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeYAAaaaaaaahhhhhh,, this is the 'Lord of the Dance Pose' Yoga cat!

This image comes to mind with the poetry.... dance over the moon and back.....

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKApr 6, 2014

Hi Liam, I am not ever puttimg those tights back on. Many of us have been through these early mornings. This one brings back memories. I've cried those early morning tears, but I could never bring back the dead. A piece that can bring back some stark memories ti me means It Is good. I see your new write Is back to being My bud so the heart may feel lighter me thinks. If I get the comments wrong Just bare with me pal, I'll get up to speed. A good write partner. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 6, 2014

angeline is that the cat that played the fiddle when the cow jumped over the moon ha ha beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 6, 2014

smiling mike just dreaming dear friend not putting my emotions or feelings on line as they are dark maybe down the line a different story wonderful comment saving the tights for a special occasion a celebration enjoy the rest of your evening