war

i was running as fast as i can i try'ed to get to my friends but i was to late the bullets were flying the bombs were bursting my friends were yelling and and shooting but i was to late i look at the sky as i lay there and die y did this happen how could it be im riddled with bullets look at me i'm out of my body now looking down i can see blood everywhare is that from me . as watch my brothers carry me back to base crying and tears soak thier face. another dead soldier for the land of free you wont be forgotten that i will see i love you all come home in one peace .
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Posted: Jan 2010
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i had this awhile now and its sad to see the young women and men die i hope this don make anyone mad im not going for that i miss my friend it was for him

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trurorob
not mad my friend just sad, that we have to bear this insanity of the human race!
rob
jazzy75
timmyc345r - honest and painful expression of war...i am sorry for your loss.hug
timmyc345r
thanks for the comments
SilverBirch
Powerful stuff . Why ?
boyshchrm6
Certainly suggests the
inhumanity of war. Such a waste.cool angel thumbs up
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