I want to die I don't even care if i don't even say good bye. Just wanna fall into a deep sleep that I'll never have to wake up from So just hand over the pills or give me a gun cause this life I'm in is no longer fun. I've been hurt too much I've been in pain for too long Now i just want to end it all The feelings I had that were happy and great were mistaken For lots of hurt and hate I've suffered too much and I'vecried for too long I no longer want to be alive I just want to be gone away from this world and away from the pain I have no reason to LIVE AND NOTING GAIN
KatfightAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 10, 2010
A lot of emotion in your poem, very strong wording.
TreckerThornhill, Ontario CanadaJan 10, 2010
Great poem, a beautiful gift in your heart. In this world some will always come along and bring the dark clouds and rain on your life. Clouds come and clowds go, but behind those clouds, The sun is always shining. Hope is a wonderful thing to have. Overcoming lifes obsticles makes us stronger You are young, you are getting stronger.
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In this world some will always come along
and bring the dark clouds and rain on your life.
Clouds come and clowds go, but behind those clouds,
The sun is always shining.
Hope is a wonderful thing to have.
Overcoming lifes obsticles makes us stronger
You are young, you are getting stronger.
rob