I wish

by maryjane86Lincoln, Nebraska, USA

Jun 2009 592 Views 11 comments

I wish...

I wish I could meet him,
My own Mr. Right.
I'd never let go,
I'd hold him so tight.
I would hug him and kiss him
and make him feel good.
I would know how to please him
like no one else could.
I wouldn't take him for granted,
In him, I'd confide
I'd stick up for him
and I'd stand by his side.
I'd cook and I'd clean
I'd give good advice,
and I'd love him forever,
without thinking twice.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jun 2009

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Comments (11)

sabeelcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaJun 28, 2009

hey, Maryjane,
you did well.is there any gentle man can hear this...?o o..k. I know she is a poet but.. these words from heart..

I wish , all these words to come true in everyones life...
sabeel

ronbrother67winterset, Iowa USAJun 28, 2009

You have very accurately and beautifully described the way a relationship should be. Thank you

maryjane86OPLincoln, Nebraska USAJun 29, 2009

Thank you for commenting on my poem, I'm just coming out of a 5 year relationship, and so my poetry is sort of all over the place. Sometimes I write depressed poems while at other times I write hopeful ones. It just depends on what mood I'm in. Anyway, I'm happy to see you guys enjoyed it, thanks again.

writerdhaka, Dhaka BangladeshJun 29, 2009

Hi Maryiane ..Dear poet... Thanks..nice your thoyghts.......I honour your feelings......well done.....go ahead.......take care

Music_Is_LifeSouthend, Essex, England UKJun 29, 2009

I'm out of a 12 year relationship where I was stopped from writing poetry, music or doing anything creative. It's nice to know that you 2 have faith that you can find your soulmate one day.

Not sure about the cooking and cleaning, I think that should be shared. I love to cook so perhaps there's room for compromise.

Well phrased, extremely uplifting and hopeful. I hope you meet this guy one day.

I'd sure love to be your Mr Right! Could do with some hugs and kisses.

Keep it up, Great work Mary Jane.

Fred X

quincandykeflavik, Westfjords IcelandJun 29, 2009

that is a lovely poem,i like it alot,i feel like it is talking about me.that is what i always wish for and i have faith that one day ill get my mr.right.

SunnnValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 30, 2009

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 30, 2009

I'm sure you will meet him maryjane86 and will do everything in your poem