excellent poem im sorry what comes around goes around it's true i hope you find true love
aussieguy41melbourne, Victoria AustraliaJun 16, 2009
great poem and i understand totally with your situation i was in the same type of relationship.but you have strength and will move on one day at a time.bless.
LadyfairEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 16, 2009
Very touching!! Wish you the best of love and remember this, too, shall pass.
johnnyboemilford, Connecticut USAJun 16, 2009
A gallant and worthy poem of a lady with true convictions. I feel the pain, anguish, betrayal, and frustration. I also feel the strength you pulled from within and the course of action that you knew you had to take, a lady of integrity and direction. Very good poem, and well versed....John
hi, maryjane. you got it again..true words. someone cannot understand their beloved ones feelings in the right meaning at the time they are in their best relation ship.. SABEEL.
dudinast pauls bay, Majjistral MaltaJun 30, 2009
Well done, keep it up
maryjane86OPLincoln, Nebraska USAJul 1, 2009
Or we could just paralyze them from the neck down.
Atheists9086Austin, Texas USAJul 1, 2009
Very beautiful. :]
I tear up every time I read this. It never fails to amaze me in it's depth. :)
mythanh2Edmonton, Alberta CanadaJul 25, 2009
Great poem....don't worry though, I believe in Karma (what goes around comes around).
wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKAug 12, 2009
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Very good poem, and well versed....John
someone cannot understand their beloved ones feelings in the right meaning at the time they are in their best relation ship..
SABEEL.
I tear up every time I read this. It never fails to amaze me in it's depth. :)
intelligent girl like you to find someone who deserves you.