aT thE agE of 18 waS a fall for onE guy hE wAs my fiRst bf... i gAve hIm 100% loVe... hE neVer sAw mE in anyWays he'd nEver apRiciated mE.. mY lOvE foR him... eVen hE hurted mE a lots of tiMe i nEver giVe up to lOVe him hOping tHat onE day hE will chAnge... yeArs passes by hE is StiLL desaME hurting mE emotionally & physically i wAs so bLind.. tHen oNe daY woKe up witH thE wHitE bAckground suddeNly am at tHe hOspitAL id trY to end up my liFe i neVer gAvE any imPortanCe with my fAmiLy aLL i kNOw iAm dUmb inLove wiTh thE wRong gUy guy wHo nEvEr gAve any rEspondS for my lOvE but thAnks god im keep goin and fight for life...
What strong emotion you express! The "wHitE bAckground" against the black is a powerful image. Sometimes it takes a real challenge to life for us to see what's really important. It's is wonderful that the poet "keep goin and fight for life". It's a sign of self-love that is the most powerful and freeing kind of love. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.
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What strong emotion you express! The "wHitE bAckground" against the black is a powerful image. Sometimes it takes a real challenge to life for us to see what's really important. It's is wonderful that the poet "keep goin and fight for life". It's a sign of self-love that is the most powerful and freeing kind of love. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.