unforgetable

by sabeelcochin,kerala., Kerala, India

Jun 2009 507 Views 14 comments

unforgetable

i cannot forget that flower,
which gave me something to remember !
it was so beautiful
and smiling to the world
with the rose petals.
it was so shy, when i seen her,
trying to hide its face from me
with the help of wind!
it failed and gave me a good smile .
i tried to kiss her, but never allowed
it never wants to be used but to be fresh !
so i have to leave it
and to search other one to fill
my dreams..

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jun 2009

About this poem:

every time we have to understand others felings too..

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Comments (14)

courageMorgantown, West Virginia USAJul 1, 2009

Beautiful poem. Well writen. I enjoyed the way you used your words, from your heart. Nice. Thanks for sharing. Bless You. Peace and Hugs!

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaJul 1, 2009

thanks courage,
your words will encourage me in my writing skill.
thanks.

SABEEL.

sshoreHyderabad, Telangana IndiaOct 19, 2009

this is so lovely sabeel
thankyou friend
bless you!

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaOct 19, 2009

Very nice Sabeel..Sometimes, it isn't meant to be.. and the next flower will be the one you held out for..and the best of the bouquet to you..

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaOct 19, 2009

Sometimes we must let them go..Sometimes they slip
through our hands. Have hope that there may be a
brighter one around the corner even though that
is hard to believe